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Adia Bali's avatar

The woods as both literal and metaphorical space, the soul knowing what the mind can't remember. That image of fingerprints on the swings you must have set up before, the body carrying proof while consciousness doesn't. There's something about cyclical return that your piece captures perfectly, the way we're drawn back to the same places not by choice but by some deeper knowing. The hut as refuge and the courage to leave it again.

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

Thank you so much!!♥️♥️

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Tsetsy's avatar

I love how the hut represents temporary safety, but the journey insists on continuing.

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

Thank you!

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JdimplyBrand's avatar

Great writing! Your word choice and flow of your article, really puts me there in the woods observing the two of you as part of the audience. Nice work!! 👍

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

Thank you! 😌

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Dawnithic's avatar

Noor, the way you’ve presented the concept of Déjà Vu here is truly amazing! Not just a fleeting feeling, but a deep journey of the soul through memories, places, and experiences. Every step in the forest seems to echo a life already lived. I felt like I was in a dream while reading.

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

Thank you! 😌

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The 2020 Report's avatar

Beautifully written wonderfully expressed

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

Thank you!!

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Rohith's avatar

Your words feel familiar, like revisiting a place my heart somehow knows. Maybe we all leave traces in these woods—thanks for reminding me that every journey has meaning.

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

Thank you! ♥️

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Michelle Lyall's avatar

I know the feeling.

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

♥️♥️

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Carol Countryman's avatar

Lovely.

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

Thank you! ♥️

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