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Michelle Lyall's avatar

I’ve read and re-read this piece to capture the layers of depth, only to find myself back to the beginning again, seeing a new perspective. Which feels like part of the point.

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

Thank you so much for reading and re-reading. Yes, It is a layered writing and I am very glad you noticed it. 🙏❤️

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Debasmita Chatterjee's avatar

Ah! The heroine's journey.

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

😌❤️

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Christopher Everett's avatar

This reads like a quiet reckoning, the kind that only comes after weathering your own storms. “Without my chaos” feels like both confession and philosophy. You turned survival into art and that’s the rarest kind of alchemy.

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

Thank you so much! Very kind of you! ❤️

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TrueToTheSpirit's avatar

I like the cascades. Well done -- meaningful and buoyant.

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

❤️😌

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Hawtorn V. Rabot's avatar

Okay, I took it so literally until the end.

Well done.

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

Thank you!❤️

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Adonis's avatar

Time oh time 🙏❤️🌸

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

❤️

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Ian DM Taniels's avatar

Lovely.

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

❤️

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TKRok's avatar

Beautifully written. Reminded me of my recent years of chaos and stillness. Thank you for sharing this piece.

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

Thank you for reading!❤️

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Dawnithic's avatar

The entire essence of your post is hidden in its title, “Without my chaos." It reflects the way the Creator works; HE never breaks you to harm you, but to remake you into something new. Beautifully written, carrying a compelling message.

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

Thank you! ❤️

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Sulaiman Nasir's avatar

That step didn't take you just outside - but a path with new horizons - clear view and confirmed new building and beginning.

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Noor Ul Ain's avatar

Thank you for reading! 😌

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